What was the critique process like?
The critique process for me was very helpfull I will say that each time I got critique was really helpfull well we were supposed to, at the beginning it was a little awkward because I was afraid to share my story with other people and not because it was all a mess talking about the grammar it was because the personal information it had on it. after the 2nd critique I felt way more comfortable because I realized that everyone was probably going through the sam process as me so I had nothing to be scared about.
The 3rd critique we've had was really helpfull, mostly people told me that I should add more feeling that I had such a great story and lots of feeling but that I didnt described any , after hearing all that I decided to be more descriptive with the way I felt and had to be brave because know it was not just my story now my feelings were involved but I did my changes and my story became way better, but now it was the most important critique, Ms.Julia made me perform my story to her and she told me I was not supposed to be scared that I was a really good writer and that I was going to do great, this raised up my confidence and made me able to perform.
The 3rd critique we've had was really helpfull, mostly people told me that I should add more feeling that I had such a great story and lots of feeling but that I didnt described any , after hearing all that I decided to be more descriptive with the way I felt and had to be brave because know it was not just my story now my feelings were involved but I did my changes and my story became way better, but now it was the most important critique, Ms.Julia made me perform my story to her and she told me I was not supposed to be scared that I was a really good writer and that I was going to do great, this raised up my confidence and made me able to perform.